DnB [JumpUp] New song: Awful Weed

[Aemone]

Hi, my name is Aemone, this is my new song: Awful weed

What you think of this?
If you like it, please share and like

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Faemone%2Faemone-awful-weed

Form Belgium

 

[IV4]

Your kick and snare sound like they came out of garageband. Your break sounds mechanical and missed placed. Your sub sounds like a simple sine wave, and your main sound is annoying.

I think you have a good start but your drum samples need beefing up and so does your bass. You could calm down on that comb filter or reverb too.

Edit: Sorry your track is not as bad as I made it sound it is just some things you should look into.

 

[Aemone]

That's nice, I would follow your advice for my next music