Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by junglistguy2221, Jun 16, 2012.
work in progress at the mo, any opinions pls?
sounds nice, reminds me of taxman and that's good
Woop woop whooommmppp.
imo it needs something melodic over the top of the bass in some sections to add more interest and more variation in the bass
or if not melody sum atmospherics
Sounding damn great and nasty. I'd just mix down a lil' bit the hats.
sounds nothing like Taxman and that indeed is good. I like it!!
cheers for the feedback and positive comments, i'll get to work on my next version
cool track man. keep it up!
Yeah those hats are a bit awful but the rest is good
can you please elaborate cause I don´t see any awfulness in the hats
I like it but you probably want little bit constructive critics
the closed hi hat is little bit too loud,I believe if you put it down anything between 1-3db down would be good,it sounds nice in home but that loud hi hat would be at crazy loud levels of like for example fabric audiosystem harsh to ear,high freqencies can becose especialy harsh at loud levels
also I would put some very high passed brigh shadow break there,to fill out the hi end
cheers for the advice people, I appreciate it
The concept is great mate . I like it that you change the sound after 4 times. Imo, i would ad some more lighter hihats also, for some more variation. Also, when there's no bass playing, add some fx, vocal sample ect... This can be a banger mate
drums are decent. bass n melody gets boring very quickly i think, needs more sounds to bounce off the bass and theres some phasing issues on some of the bass notes
here's my updated version. i'm sure the high pitched noise in the first section will be either hit or miss so your thoughts are much appreciated. hopefully the mix sounds better generally either way
when it kicks into that second bassline it needs some synth leads for real this is awesome too
keep the pads from the intro going!
What i'd do different:
The hats a bit louder in the mix, and some more high end.
Maybe some more fx
Rest is top though, like the flow in it
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