JUMP UP Put the gun to ya / Tunk. mp3

[tunk]

http://dnbshare.com/download/puttheguntoya.mp3.html

tried to get a stompa, almost hardcore feel to the tune. any ideas as to how to make the bass progress on these type of tracks would be nice..gunna try notching up an octave i think? i struggle with the structure/arrangement of tracks a lot too.
any C + C welcome! nice one...

 

[Welsh Junglist]

Just had a listen, maybe try a more punchy sub bass under it? I not sure tbh erm, try maybe not fading the bassline out so much and try variating it instead, just an idea.

 

[RoyalJump]

The Idea is very great. The Bassline is cool. But dont like the fading out of it.

 

[tunk]

cheer 4 feedback guys, gunna take another look at the fadey bass thing