JUMP UP DnB, PLEASE HELP ME OUT HERE!!!

[Dirtklod]

Was just wondering what anyone thought to these tracks, the first one in-particular, because I'd like to know if I'm along the right lines here so that I can carry on doing what I'm doing.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5839849719a4e9a4/

http://www.zshare.net/audio/583974434687bd77/

If it's not playing on there you can download them here:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/zrsoma

http://www.sendspace.com/file/wh400s

 

[philski]

they aint bad mate, like the second one more.

 

[Dirtklod]

Nice one!

Any critical comments? I'd like to know what I can improve on.

 

[krease]

yeah 2nd track is pretty sick bro, u got the vocal in there nicely.