Jump Up D&B

[junglistguy2221]

https://soundcloud.com/chris-hawker-2%2Fhostility-jump-up-mix

NEW MIX -

https://soundcloud.com/chris-hawker-2%2Fhostile-vip

just an idea at the moment. not happy with the drums right now but any other tips on what to change or add is much appreciated, cheers.

 

[D Double U]

I know practically FA about production but...

Synth

- lacks groove during the first lfo'd sections...fades or some side chaining to give it a pumping rhythm based around the steppyness of the beats?
+ Those end parts of the phrases are very cool!

Drums

- Snare doesn't cut through the mix massively well, more 5Khz possibly extend the shelf at 8 by a fraction?
+ The groove suits the tune to a T

General

- serious lack of high end. Boost top shovels/ extend the eq cuts?
+ with some FX / reversed cymbals etc you will quirky see that come together, good work!


Again i know little but i hope this helps!

 

[junglistguy2221]

thanks for the detailed feedback!

here's a new version. added more high end and added to the snare. was messing about so changed the tune a bit, not sure what direction to go in really!

https://soundcloud.com/chris-hawker-2%2Fhostile-vip