"Jordan" New liquid track

[IndustrialDream]

Been working on a liquid track for a few days now, finally rounded it off but just wondering some peoples opinions on anyways i can improve it!

http://soundcloud.com/londonscene/shadowman-jordan

 

[Mr Fletch]

Very old school sounding intro, I like it. String sounds seem a little loud in the mix in my headphones. Liking the little rim shots on the percussion. Nice sub after the drop but I'm not too sure about the riser just before it???

 

[kama]

I'm tuned in.

so far so cool, the intro is cool. The highs are maybe a touch aggressive in the mixdown. And tbh the intro could be either shorter or have more change in it. Maybe it would work better in a mix I guess.
Then comes the drop. All is good but there is 1 bass note i can not understand, maybe its off key, maybe not but I'm not too keen on it. Good mixdown once my ears get used to the aggressive highs. Or maybe it could be a bit heavy on the compression, the transients are a bit dull, not cutting through. Nothing radical tho.

The vibe is cool. The beats are very pleasing.