jonl - Finding peace

jonl

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EDIT: busy modifying it, there were some issues.

Sorry for the disturbance, just gonna use this as a placeholder for now.

OK, she's reuploaded.

http://soundcloud.com/jonl/findingpeace

Thanks to the guys who commented, you're feedback has helped to make a better tune, IMO.
 
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djdevz

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not bad track, but some issues for me imo...

intro was waay too long...im not gonna lie, i skipped a lot in the beginning, decent atmos with the crashing waves etc, but keep it interesting as well
ur lil snare cut before the drums kicks in a lil too loud,
n i think ur drum loop could do with some variation, it sounds as though youve found a loop and just stuck it throughout the track.
n i think ur bassline melody is not in the right key...well it kinda goes but some parts sound off.

a couple of harsh words i no but im just being honest.
 

Phat_Sam

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Definately fits the title. I nearly fell asleep during the intro. in a good way! It is FAR too long though. lol

again. the break needs to be varied up a bit.

excellent padwork!

nicely done sir!
 

Thin and crispy

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loving the atmospherics and drums on this mate but i think it could be spruced up with a few sprinkles n sparkles here n there to give it a bit more colour :) its like you have a picturesque pond, with no fish ;p
rly like this tho mate
 
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