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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by jonl, Nov 8, 2010.

  1. jonl

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    real smooth 'take u to another world' track...

    but for me theres no low end on the kick at all..i think it would complement the sub if u got those 2 sitting nicely together.
    n maybe introduce another synth a bit later in the track? Some sort of pad or smooth melody..
     
  3. Fishy:)

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    This is beautiful, just my kind of track:)
    But ye the kick needs low end and would be cool with some variations of the drum pattern.
    Everything else is just awesome:D

    ---------- Post added at 14:21 ---------- Previous post was at 14:13 ----------

    Loved ur tracks so much man i downloaded all of them:) fucking sweeet sweet tunes
     
  4. jonl

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    And to think I literally eq'd a touch of low end out of the kick purposefully.... I knew I shouldn't of.

    Thanks guys
     
  5. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    get some real kicks, i mean, sampled from real packs, not synth ones!
    good good good vibe man! =)
    kinda a bit repetitive after a while, you should add variations after each X bars, predictable, but each of these, new ones.
     
  6. miszt

    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    beautiful track! kick def needs beefin up, rest is sweet, nice work!