jonl - Distant Galaxies

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by jonl, Nov 14, 2010.

  1. jonl

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  2. elmaruk

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    Very nice Jon, Intro is sounding good, cymbols very nice, if it was me i'd probably think about adding in a couple of of single hits in the the intro, weather it be precussion or from a synth i dunno.

    the break does it for me, very nice.

    the bass is sounding nice don't get me wrong but i think a more rolling bassline would sit tighter.

    It might just be down to prefrence but it kinda felt like i was waiting for a drop that never came, i think you could spice it up a bit.


    don't get me wrong, i sound a bit negitive maybe...the track is sounding sweeet!
     
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  3. conclude

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    Another swell, fresh, chilly tune. Nice one! I agree with elmaruk on that something might be missing though. Maybe give it a bit edge by adding a fat drop, usually works well with these kinda tunes too.
     
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    Lovin what you've done with this mate, the only thing i can say is its not long enough!! you could streth another 3 minutes of this with some wicked progression!