John Wood - Piano pick (demo)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Rymka, May 2, 2011.

  1. Rymka

    Rymka New Member

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    Concept - piano + drum + small bass.

    Looking for your feedback. Thanks a lots!

    Also if you have some ideas or something interested to say to me you can always write me a message in soundcloud.

    P.S. I'm excellent in piano melodies, so if you want to make something together, maybe we can contact.

    Waiting for feedback!
     
  2. Nice

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    Dont know what happened from :55-1:20ish, your drums lost all punch. I would also probably put reverb/delay on the piano since it's playing a graceful melody instead of something quick and funky. I didn't really like the bass sound at all. Didn't seem to fit with the rest of the track much, try filtering/EQ'ing the top end of it more and give it some warmth. Usually dnb has a sin wave playing really low for the subbass too, to give it the rumble. Basically just work on your drums and add a subbass IMO.
     
  3. DJSatire

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    Yeah, the piano sounds really flat at the beginning, definitely needs some reverb or delay or something to give it a bit of oomph.
     
  4. Rymka

    Rymka New Member

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    Oh, thanks!
    I will try to make something more interesting in the beginning and change bassline into something.