Intro is pretty. Tension is nice. Big bass drum. Drop is good but missing something. I think the track could use more energetic whomps and less technical sophistication.
To use a metaphor of my own device. You make fine craft beers. But the fun of jump up is cheep liquor packs a punch. So use more cheep(well placed)liquor and less fine craft. Hope this helps.
And the track still kicks ass. I hate you.