JMB - NEW TUNE - CONTAINS STRINGS

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by joe_mb, May 19, 2008.

  1. joe_mb

    joe_mb JMB

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    started this earlier today, its obv nowhere near finished, ive just looped it a couple of times, but would like to know what some mans think.
    cool
     
  2. Catsel

    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

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    the bit at the start of it could be its own lil tune.. in the style of lynx n alix perez, lil rolla!

    the tune itself needs to be alot heavier and different if its going to compete with all the other Jump up out there.

    besides all that, its a yes from me (y)
     
  3. Catsel

    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

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    caddy shack is heavy mate!!

    grimey beats!!
     
  4. joe_mb

    joe_mb JMB

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    safe for that mate, much appreciated
     
  5. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    sounds cool.
    but like castel said it could be a bit heavier on th drop!
    but for the start of a tune it sounds good.
    make sure ya finish it!
    bigup
     
  6. Fallout

    Fallout Ninja in a GTR

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    I thought this was plenty heavy enough. But we all like different things. Liked the intro and the bassline. It bothers me in these sorts of tunes when the intro is totally disjointed from the contents after the drop, and they end up like two separate tunes. What really sucks is when the intro is more enjoyable than the post drop. But I gotta say, in this tune, the post drop seems to connect with the intro, and has enough of it's own character to work.

    I'd like to hear another layer in there to give the bassline something to roll against and add some extra character. But I'm liking it so far. :rslayer:
     
  7. joe_mb

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    safe mate, ive just done a bit more on it using some of the suggestions, if you wanna have another listen...
    but cheers for the feedback anyway.... just about to have a listen to your new one
     
  8. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    Think the drums are very quiet but in general a very good tune idea mate. Liking the bass whomps. Think you are onto something good.
    peace