jesy - day after day (dnb)

ApeCat

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I think it sounds really generic, cheesy and predictable, the intro is too drawn-out, the b-line is really weak, the drums need mixing, the melodic elements are static and there's little progression beyond "something comes in on the one and stays around for 16 bars and then disappears again".

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equilibrium

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sounds very pop. pretty difficult to make it through the long intro, i skipped ahead. its very simple. theres a lot that needs to be improved and added. needs to be busier in the drums. needs more in the synths. its so predictable.
 
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