jes141 - rainy days (Liquid D&B)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by jes4, Oct 15, 2012.

  1. jes4

    jes4 Member

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    the newest track i made,feedback would be nice


     
  2. equilibrium

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    I like the pop feel it has. You should listen through Max Martins discography, seriously, to get some ideas about how to consistently introduce new elements and keep your track interesting. Drums need a lot of work.
     
  3. KolendoMusic

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    Sounds pretty plain straightforward, you've got drums, a single melody, and an unchanging (sine?) bassline.
    Try layering elements, adding effects like filters, reverb, chorus, etc., also introducing some other tinkering melodies would be nice to change it up.
    The mid/low-mid range is severely lacking. Filling up the "space" of a track is important for sure.
    Otherwise I think the ideas you have in here are nice, just a little basic. Keep it up!