jazzy liquid roller

[ShirPan]

some feedback would be so nice!

https://soundcloud.com/shirpan%2Fforgotten-dreams

cheers!

 

[Tone1304]

Really feeling this track nice vibes man I would say turn the hats down a little bit bit other than that I really like this and the vocals are spot on you should include some vocals before the the first drop but not the sane as the break maybe just the last bit of the break

 

[Mr Fletch]

Yeah really diggin this, very jazzed up and laid back.

 

[ShirPan]

thank you guys ^^

 

[Deleted member 85438]

not really feeling this man but i think you will keep at it and wow me one day not too far in the future so keep at it!

 

[ShirPan]

cheers for the feedback mate