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just a little fun if sounds ok a WIP if not kicked lol... apreciate feedback....
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- Thread starter Manu Forti
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just a little fun if sounds ok a WIP if not kicked lol... apreciate feedback....
ill return favour
Howdy man,
really liked the intro! A lot! The sounds and vocal chop really reminded me of C.R.S.T, it had that nice Garage kinda feel
Check them out if your wondering what I mean, Forever After and Good Love are nice tunes
Although I liked the intro I think you could shorten it a bit. I know you are adding some new elements here and there but they are very subtle. Mind you, I am not really in the position to talk about long intros! Especially with some of my older tunes!
As for the percussion, I must admit I'm not that keen, I think you could play around with that a little bit. I has some nice interesting parts that said though! Could probably do with bringing the percs up a bit too
As for the drop, I'm not really sure. It's ok, its not that big of a change! IS there any bass? I'm only on headphones but I'm not really hearing any bassy parts.
Overall though, cool chilled out tune! Nice and relaxing, you certainly have something interesting here, feel like you could do a little more with it though
Cheers
really liked the intro! A lot! The sounds and vocal chop really reminded me of C.R.S.T, it had that nice Garage kinda feel
Check them out if your wondering what I mean, Forever After and Good Love are nice tunes Although I liked the intro I think you could shorten it a bit. I know you are adding some new elements here and there but they are very subtle. Mind you, I am not really in the position to talk about long intros! Especially with some of my older tunes!
As for the percussion, I must admit I'm not that keen, I think you could play around with that a little bit. I has some nice interesting parts that said though! Could probably do with bringing the percs up a bit too
As for the drop, I'm not really sure. It's ok, its not that big of a change! IS there any bass? I'm only on headphones but I'm not really hearing any bassy parts.
Overall though, cool chilled out tune! Nice and relaxing, you certainly have something interesting here, feel like you could do a little more with it though
Cheers
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agree about the intro and drop sounding quite apart
but i like it a lot overall, i could vibe to this with ease
but i like it a lot overall, i could vibe to this with ease
