Jaw - Heavy Breather

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  1. ManuForti

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    New track comments and feedback welcome and apreciated

     
  2. dj cluster

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    drums & atmos sounds cool;
    I would modulate in some way bassline...
    Synt are cool, maybe try adding some variation...
    Nice work!
     
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    yeah i was hoping the atmosphere change half way through would give ma break on the variation... i really do suck at keeping listeners hooked and varying my tracks...
    Every time i try some sort of change up or any variation it just sounds crap ;/
    any tips????
     
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    Bass could really use some modulation, and the high freqs of the kick is abit too much imo and not leveled too good with the rest of the track. u got some cool atmospheric sounds but i wish it was more
     
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    changed a few things :D