Jaw - Heavy Breather

[Manu Forti]

New track comments and feedback welcome and apreciated

https://soundcloud.com/jawgawn%2Fheavy-breather

 

[dj cluster]

drums & atmos sounds cool;
I would modulate in some way bassline...
Synt are cool, maybe try adding some variation...
Nice work!

 

[Manu Forti]

yeah i was hoping the atmosphere change half way through would give ma break on the variation... i really do suck at keeping listeners hooked and varying my tracks...
Every time i try some sort of change up or any variation it just sounds crap ;/
any tips????

 

[Fishy:)]

Bass could really use some modulation, and the high freqs of the kick is abit too much imo and not leveled too good with the rest of the track. u got some cool atmospheric sounds but i wish it was more

 

[Manu Forti]

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