Jaw - Feel Trip

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Got some good idea's there mate and good vibes, (have you been listening to logical progression by any chance!?) Think you could work on the drums a bit, maybe could do with more percussion in there, also from what I can hear you've only got 1 layer to your snare, try having one low snare with one rim shot and one clap all into 1 snare and maybe some other weird percussion for this sort of tune, quite minimal so you can get nice an experimental with it! hope this helps mate!
 
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im trying for the minimal thing just now so using a lot of claps instead of snares ill give layering them a bash see if i can get a nice er sound out of it....
what about the bass line is it too much for such a chilled track?
 

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I'd say turn down the lfo rate and add more effects to the bass, seems a bit too wobbly for the track, with this sort of track your midrange bass aint as important as sampling and adding textures, all down to personal preference in the end mate, try listening to other minimal artists tracks and see what they do to help give you ideas.
 

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awrite thanx im gonna do a VIP on it anyway cos a mates showcasing it in a mix hes doing but i really wasnt finished with the track so it goes out like that ;/
 

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the jaw thing is sorta gimmiky i think you know i could use jaws from said movie or jaws from bond film or anything related to bling teeth or braced teeth for pictures... i also liked the name so .... meh :D
 

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I like it, maybe you could just vary the lfo sometimes for variation, and like structure4 said, resample with some filter variations etc.
 

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yeah i liked it aswell but felt it was too wobbly for minimal il do a VIP and then ill be happy its fixed. taking into consideration all your thoughts of course

cheers again lads great help
 

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hmmm mabye but i like things to be right and my producing is getting better mabye not great but i think when i got a few more songs done right ill go through all my old ones and either tweak or VIP them
 
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