James H - Royal Jelly

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by frozenzeus, May 10, 2015.

  1. frozenzeus

    frozenzeus New Member

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    Just made switch from more techno/trance sounds towards DnB, so looking for some feedback on my track. Thanks in advance.

     
  2. Solace

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    The idea is definitely there, but the excecution is a bit less.
    The intro is awesome, but it gets a bit repetitive. Maybe change the bass notes, leave out a first note, stuff like that...
    The drop is good, but I wouldn't put any subs in the buildup, if you get those out, the drop will be much
    And a the sub is also a bit to loud I think..
    But quite solid work if this is one of your first dnb tracks
     
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