The idea is definitely there, but the excecution is a bit less.
The intro is awesome, but it gets a bit repetitive. Maybe change the bass notes, leave out a first note, stuff like that...
The drop is good, but I wouldn't put any subs in the buildup, if you get those out, the drop will be much
And a the sub is also a bit to loud I think..
But quite solid work if this is one of your first dnb tracks