Jacomelli - Honest

[Jacomelli]

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Hello Everyone,

just a little thing i have been working on.. would really like feedback! I need to know where i can improve / where i need to focus my time on. Thanks

 

[horace111]

I like the dark atmosphere and the sharp crispy rattling drums , but i would go somewhere else with the bassline. IMO something in the melody doesn't really fit , it might just be one note but I can't really put my finger on it. But overall a nice production and definetly has a lot of potential

 

[Cyclopyze]

Loving the drums and the bassline but u should rly re-think the melody, it somehow doesn't fit and it's kinda...dunno..meh.
But tumbs up just for the first 2, drums are kicking and with the bassline and some work it could be an awesome roller: