Jacomelli - Digital Daydream (First Track)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Jacomelli, Aug 26, 2010.

  1. Jacomelli

    Jacomelli J4COM3LL1

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    hello everyone,

    ive decided to jumped on the production bandwagon, this is my first track so please be easy on me... feedback and advice is most welcome. Thanks! Jaco :)

    Jacomelli - Digital Daydream
     
  2. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    How hard is it to post in the right section?

    About the track, it's okay, but to boring.
    The drumloop is constantly the same, try chopping it up and making variations instead of just using a break.
    Next the sounds are all a little weak, don't go that good with each other.
     
  3. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    i dig what you did with the synths, youre more musical that i wouldve thought (for some reason). i expected you to do deep tech or minimal even. i reckon you can scrap the jungle break and write some glitchy minimal drummachine beats instead, would go well with it i think. for a first attempt its pretty decent. ill move the thread for you btw
     
  4. Jacomelli

    Jacomelli J4COM3LL1

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    Cheers man, yeah i might try that... Im defo into the deep tech, not so much minimal.

    also @ ARTFX... Yeah it does need some more variation, i agree. but its my first tune man so give me a little slack. lol

    Cheers for the advice boys. will defo take it on board.... currently working on a house track and dark/deep tecky one aswell so will keep yah posted.
     
  5. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Yeah cool, like to check them out.
    I'm also working on some housy electro stuff right now.
     
  6. DJ Spliff

    DJ Spliff Never Enuff Vinyl

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    Not bad at all for the first thing you've seen fit to post up man.
     
  7. ruksi

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    i dont think its too bad man, especially for your first tune.. i like how its a jungle jazz kinda flavour.. its got potential definatly.

    but im not sure what drum loop you have used it sounds a bit glitchy, it needs to be a lot cleaner. you might need to play around with the decay settings maybe so it sounds a bit tighter...

    but keep goin man you will just keep improving