I've never really introduced myself...

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Djashleyp, Apr 28, 2013.

  1. Djashleyp

    Djashleyp DJKomatose

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    I've been user of this forum for years but never took my time out to say hello to everybody. So Hi! I'm Ash. I'm an apprentice software engineer from Birmingham. I've been writing music since i was about 13 (I'm 23 now) but my passion for writing drum 'n' bass has never died over the years. My productions have slowly got better over the years and i've just made the move from Cubase on a PC, to Logic on a Mac. I'm going to leave you with my first track that has come out of logic. Please feel free to leave me some feedback, even if you think it's mediocre, let me know why :)

    peace

     
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    Nice work, drums should be a bit more punchier and louder, it would give some power to tune ;)
     
  3. alcaponeuk

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    easy bro im from birmingham haha, well wolverhampton to be specific, yeh man the tunes nice, nice clean mix - i definitely think it needs more drums, more hats and crashes, and more sub bass! other than that its got a cool vibe man
     
  4. hyperd4eva

    hyperd4eva H&M SCARVES

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    Nice tune mate. Love the fidgety vibe to it!
     
  5. tarantula2013

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    Nice track, but where is a download link? ;)
     
  6. Astem

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    Nice use of sounds here. all the distorted noises in the background are great! I'd take off a bit of high end on the open hat though, too sizzly for my tastes. Great Work!