Its been too long forum i realized no one has seen how i have improved

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Sirenz, May 24, 2011.

  1. Sirenz

    Sirenz New Member

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    Its been too long forum i realized no one has seen how i have improved so here is the tune i am crackalacking on... comments and crits welcome
     
  2. Scatcat

    Scatcat It don't mean shit

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    I don't like the closed hi hat it's quite dry and repetitive. Sticks out way too loud before the drop.

    After the drops is actually quite nice. There's some weird changes in volume on the drums. but yeah sounds good (y)
     
  3. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Intro works... it's on the bland side for me overall though... lots of room to do more imo.

    PERC is rocking, the hats are solid, you've got to do something with the SD imo, every 2&4 forever gets old quick, a simple fill every 32 or 64 would suffice : )

    The Bass is ok, it's not moving me tbh. I like how it gracefully comes in and out (via the slow Attack on it's 1s), but I think it'd greatly benefit from some interesting Midrange work playing off of it.

    The BrkDwn has SO much space to add more, get on it!!!
    The Ending is 'way' too abrupt imo.


    Fun tune, but imo, it is incomplete as it stands.
    PROD overall is crisp.
     
  4. Sirenz

    Sirenz New Member

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    cheers guys good feed back TIME TO CRACKALACK ON WITH THIS SHIZZOOO <3
     
  5. Reloaded

    Reloaded New Member

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    That is a wicked tune dude, very deep and dark atmospheres going on there. Im kind of in the same boat i went away for ages and learnt stuff, i spose everyone is always improving :)