is this good for sumting a 12 yr old made

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  1. 444joel444

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    Dan M hard gay northern bear

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    cant open the file mate. try uploading it to dnbshare.com, its used a lot on this site, also start a thread on it in the new talent and track reviews sub forum. if you do this i'll check it out dude.
     
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    it works 4 me but ill try dnbshare!
     
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    Dan M hard gay northern bear

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    theres a part near the middle where the wobble bass seems slightly out of time,i might be wrong because the sample is so small. drums sound nice and live but the snare could be a bit beefier. good breaks. overall for a wobble bass its ok i like it. for 12 yrs old i must say well done dude sounds good.
     
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    Aahh :D the beat's pretty hot, only thing is its way too short
     
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    at least a 12 year old knows a tune isn't created my mixing 2 different ones together on turntables
     
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    Good mate, just keep at it and by the time you're 15 you'll be amazing.
     
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    RevTech Butthole=output transduce

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    Hey mate being honest without a full song it's hard to judge.

    I myself ain't that much in age, 14 so I could level with you here.

    The beat is pretty good, but you need some EQ work and compression, and some originality. I myself did better when 12 so step it up.

    Learn music theory, read the production section on this forum and you'll be fine
     
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    heh...
     
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    btw just listened to that... not bad! im guessing the bass didnt come from an FL synth, which is always good! although ive been makin some phat ass sounds with fruity kick for a while, you can make it sound like that low, bouncy bass that dillinja uses alot. good tune though, post full plox!

    p.s add moar clownstep and its a winner!
     
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    its good for your age but its just that you have a jungle type drum beat and a jump up bassline wich doesnt really go well together but keep practicing and you go far.
    what program did you use?
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    tunes ok man a bit basic tho an not much there to judge.
    but i dont see how age has much to do with it??
     
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    RevTech Butthole=output transduce

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    Ehh opinions opinions, people thought my stuff was pretty good.

    but one key thing was wrong about them, they were a bit too slow, least he got that down.


    This kid reminds me of http://www.youtube.com/user/cooltoons247

    his tunes are balls to the wall
     
  14. Cl0wnsteppa

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    yeah fair enough ;) not gettin atcha or anything.

    gonna have to get some of my tunes up here one day.
     
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    i am 12 and what is this?
     
  16. 444joel444

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    i used fl!
    and reaper for the link one