Downloading now..than i'll listen and tell you what I think
Alright i listened to the track and uhmm its kind off nice i like you're mixdown sounds tight you used something like camelphat or camelspace for the bassline?
Anyway maybe you should build it up with only the beat at the beginning and then have some upcoming sounds and then you let the rest kick in might give it a bit more energy?
Not bad at all the only thing I would say is your drums feel very dry - I would add a splash type sample (symbol/ gated crash) to your snare just to give it that extra dominance - it seems a bit lost at the mo. good work though