InternetofThings - A1 (feedback wanted :)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by iot, Apr 14, 2016.

  1. iot

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    hello, nice tune, i esp. like the intro which could be much longer without drums. imo, the plugged lead synth and mid range bass instrument don't match well, maybe try to use other instruments or EQ/filter the current to have them sit better in the mix. the drums need work, they sound a bit odd to my ears for now. maybe try to use some transient shaper or stereo widening tools. just my 2 cents worth .. i like your track. :2thumbs:
     
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    thanks dude :)
     
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    i think you need to focus on your arrangement a bit better. try working in 16 bar sections, ie 16 bar intro, 16 bar breakdown, 16 bar build up etc, you track drops, then the intro part comes back in, then the drums cut out, it gets quite confusing sounding which then breaks up the flow of the track. try imitating arrangements of tracks you like, noting which parts they use in each section to avoid too much repetition. just something to bear in mind, hope this helps!