Instant Minds - Peaceful Army

[MSDNB]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KoUyRsCB9Y8

 

[hibrow]

I like the bass riff you've got there mate. The track could definitely do with some changing up though. It's relentless! I'll give you that. Maybe sort out some drum fills, some breaks, a few highs & lows. More dynamics to the tune would lift it so much more.

 

[megagnome]

I agree with hibrow. You have a solid foundation there, but the real work starts now. I'd also consider cutting the length of the track by some minutes. It's really long for what it is.