THe intro is too long, and not varient enough. By the minute mark either the bass or breaks should be kicking in. The beats' levels are too low, the bass is used to little, get some higher bass notes in there to spice it up. Overall the tune is nice, atmospheric feel is there, but you need more bass in it. Beats without bass is a tragedy. Keep at it mate.
thanks all for the feedback, yeah i thought the intro was a bit long i do get frustrated myself sometimes with tune intros that are long, jus sounded right at the time i spose lol
ive literally only been producing about 4 weeks now this is my first proper remix so will of course be off a little here and there but thanks for the feedback its much appreciated & advice will be put to good use, good luck to all who have entered the competition been fun working on this project