I was one of those people who listened and didn't comment.
I didn't really know what to say first time- no offence intended, just I didn't know what to say.
I had another listen, and I think madknob is right. It's not got (not sure what the right word is) direction? Shape? Structure? One of those. It's not got the impact of a classic build-drop-breakdown-drop, but it's got too many elements to be minimal.
Part of the problem is the housey section near the end: it's not wrong necessarily, but it messes up the structure.