Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by alz, Jun 9, 2014.
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Sounds clean . But IMO, it's a bit boring. It's not bad, but like something is missing.
I was one of those people who listened and didn't comment.
I didn't really know what to say first time- no offence intended, just I didn't know what to say.
I had another listen, and I think madknob is right. It's not got (not sure what the right word is) direction? Shape? Structure? One of those. It's not got the impact of a classic build-drop-breakdown-drop, but it's got too many elements to be minimal.
Part of the problem is the housey section near the end: it's not wrong necessarily, but it messes up the structure.
Now about the song: one thing for sure is that I really liked the drums on this track, good work! but I'd do something with the bass, make it more... prominent, maybe. It seems kind of thin, you know?
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