Very nice bongos, cymbal is way too high (no idea whether or not you have control over that or not), the synths are nicely stereofied/delayed with stereo, the vocals are very nice too - that reverb is killer, sub is way too low - hit the 100-200Hz's up to get that low-mid sound even in speakers with just a 3inch speaker.
Not sure if I like the beats' sudden stop, maybe get a small reverb on it to give it some continuity, but the pad's and pretty much everything else is sounding really nice.
Keep it up mate,
Steve