If I Could (Neuro)

Dark Lizardro

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#2
I loved I pretty much liked the intro on this one! I think you could get a bigger drop, though. The track is pretty solid, I loved the bass too! Keep it up, man, this is a soon to be banger!
 

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#6
Try jumping around with the octaves.
The drums are sounding fantastic but they need a little more variety to keep them interesting.
 

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Thanks man I felt the same way about drum variation. Gonna hopefully get back in tomorrow so will update when I'm done :)
 

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#8
Sick tune man. Intro isnt to my tastes, but that bass us a killer.

Try some variation with bassline and break a bit more, not just the synths. And if you mix the fill layers of the break a bit louder it would sound way more tricky.
 
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I reckon the arp section that starts from the beginning needs something to accompany it. It's a little lost on its own. Maybe a string, vocal sample, ???

HTH

M
 

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#12
Right just given it a little update, boosted the volume of the little fills throughout the track, and added some more ambiance and pads to the intro and throughout.
 

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#13
heavy man
bass is sick
drums are nice and weighty too

id really like a section were the beat picks up to a regular 1-11 kick placement oh and snare 5 and 13
but thats just me.lol
overall its sick tho mate
 

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#14
Thank you bro. I still think I need to do something more with the section before the central breakdown so might see if something like that works there :)
 

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Thank you bro. I still think I need to do something more with the section before the central breakdown so might see if something like that works there :)
nice
maybe the whole second half of the tune could be like that
you know how much people complain about not enough variation.lol
 

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#17
Noticed it was playing the first edit through my phone, but with the new waveform? Not bad soundcloud. Should be all sorted now :)
 
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