I need help please!

[Wilko]

https://soundcloud.com/wilkinson999%2Funtitled-10

I posted this track awhile ago but it needed a lot of work. I think it's coming along now. But any feedback on where it should go (if it at all) would be most helpful!


Thanks a lot people.

 

[maschinistom]

Hello, I like it, nice track!!
U seem to have the same problem as I do... master sounds too bright, pls look at EQing. Also, pls look st scooping some in the bass and mid regions to avoid muddyness. Good work mate!!

 

[Manu Forti]

Nice ravey vibe with that old school sounding bass...

see if you can make that more interesting and more of the same in regards of everything else

 

[Danny_Intro]

WOW THIS INTRO !! Drums and chords are spot on, little break fits well
Into the break down then.. whats happened ? it drops to early ? or is that still the build up ? Think you need to sort the structure @ 55seconds where those keys come in
That should carry on for another 8 bars then into the drop.. the drop comes out of nowhere making it hard to follow
Iv high hopes for this track man, that intro is wicked ! keep at it fella

 

[Leniz]

Sounds cool. Not a fan of the drop. But thats just personal taste I guess

 

[Wilko]

WOW THIS INTRO !! Drums and chords are spot on, little break fits well
Into the break down then.. whats happened ? it drops to early ? or is that still the build up ? Think you need to sort the structure @ 55seconds where those keys come in
That should carry on for another 8 bars then into the drop.. the drop comes out of nowhere making it hard to follow
Iv high hopes for this track man, that intro is wicked ! keep at it fella

Thanks for the feedback mate. Means a lot especially coming from you! I'll keep working on it and keep everyone updated.

 

[Wilko]

Hello, I like it, nice track!!
U seem to have the same problem as I do... master sounds too bright, pls look at EQing. Also, pls look st scooping some in the bass and mid regions to avoid muddyness. Good work mate!!

It isn't easy this music making business is it! Mastering is bloody difficult! thanks for the feedback. Hopefully I will be able to improve it soon.