DnB I know I should be workin` on that competiton track but this one had to be finished first :D

[Ihamitsu]

Yo,
I know I know.... inteligent dnb track in competition or whatever should be the stuff I´m working on but I had this gem in progress so I needed to finish it first It´s everything you would expect from me
So basicaly heavy, drums driven evil shit .... so check it and let me know, allright ?

https://soundcloud.com/mahoni-j%2Fnovichok-ende_31%2Fs-rmzjP

 

[logikz]

You got cool drum sound on this one, I don't like the reece bass synth so much and the intro / bridge sounds like it's missing the strings/pads on top. You just need to write more tunes, youll get there sooner or later, keep at it you clearly have talent.

 

[Ihamitsu]

Thanks man,
really appreciate feedback ... I can try to do something with intro, but withour the reece in the background, it sounds really empty

 

[IV4]

Reece in the beginning sounds fine to me. I would do more automation with it though. Like Mr. Logizk said an arpeggio, strings or pad would sound good. I think your mix is a bit off balance and you try and get your hats and perks louder, or everything else more quiet rather. It is a cool track overall with well made parts they just need a better mix down. Now that this mix was all that bad.

 

[BetaFlex]

i like it. the intro could use more. and something in the meat for a change up. more percussion, drop the reece out here and there. this could be a good tune, dont stop working on it.

 

[Ihamitsu]

Reece in the beginning sounds fine to me. I would do more automation with it though. Like Mr. Logizk said an arpeggio, strings or pad would sound good. I think your mix is a bit off balance and you try and get your hats and perks louder, or everything else more quiet rather. It is a cool track overall with well made parts they just need a better mix down. Now that this mix was all that bad.

Thank you for listening and opinion. I´m not sure about the mix tho... I was listening everywhere possible and I was pretty much Ok with how it sounds but maybe I just don´t have the distance from the track anymore ... Heard it like milion times already

i like it. the intro could use more. and something in the meat for a change up. more percussion, drop the reece out here and there. this could be a good tune, dont stop working on it.

Thanks for feedback. Well I will think about the muting reece in some parts but I´m afraid there is no more space for percussion... This track is pretty stacked already and anything I tried to add just turned bad....