only on headphones but can hear well enough, the piano riff or w/e it is sounds a bit loud, taking up alot the mix, i like the rising bass you have, the drums need to be filled out/eq'd a bit better with touches of reverb etc, give it bit of a shine.
sorry if this all seems negative haha, the idea is all there, just lacking the polish on the mixdown at the moment. the shaker you have, I'd take that out doesnt seem to really help the drums just clutters things up, maybe just bring it down alot and leave the highs of it there.
but first thing to do is bring that riff down quite a few decibels, and maybe the sub up