I AM TRYING TO DO SOMETHING NEW ELECTRONICALLY I NEED FEEDBACK.

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  1. fearband

    fearband New Member

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    hey whats up. I have been working on mixing synths and distortion forever, well I wish to have a mixture of these two In somewhat of a throwback type of way. If you understand what I mean. I am looking for some criticism on this track
    thank you
    https://soundcloud.com/fearband/f-f
     
  2. Cold Quake

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    Dunno man, seems a bit strange.
     
  3. whiterob81

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    I really like this. It's odd alright but there's kind of a groove there. It's got more of an early Ministry feel to it. I think you need to work on mastering it. Some of the volume levels tend to go a bit all over the place. Apart from that it's deadly
     
  4. fearband

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    What do you mean?

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    Haha thank you ministry is one of my influences. I never thought i would hear that haha. Ill explain everything going on. verse has a a dirgey deep synth it has a bass going on and it has a industrial clang mixed with the original synth that is dirgy. For the next part I added a new dirgey synth. The reason why I keep the drum down so the dirgey synth pronounces more. For pre chorus drum is louder. The in betweens are as follows. A distorted low low synth. The distorted low low synth in a faster pattern. And then a bass going back. Thenpre chorus. New dirgey noise bass is more pronounced because synths are there and there is lesser bass notes and I added a new muddy noise, mixed it with another new distorted synth. During this part I put the drum super high again. Chorus it is two distorted synths duking it out. Mixed. And I made the bass synths double in speed so it has this weird feel. Then I added a new synth that created a weird sound above that. And for the ending the drum is up again. I'm worried the sounds are panned in one direction. That's cuz I got tinnitus. Is that a problem in this song. Help me plz balance it so its right
     
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  5. fearband

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    bump I do not want this to die.
     
  6. Schallmann

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    Really not the music im into, but sounds interesting! (not negative!)
     
  7. fearband

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    Thank you for the listen buddy! Can I listen to some of yours?