Hyqxyz - Monster (DNB)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by horace111, Dec 13, 2010.

  1. horace111

    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    It's been a long while since I've made a dnb tune, but while I should've been studying for my maths exam I came up with this and finished it this morning. I'm not too sure about the intro or repetitiveness and I've also tried another way to master my tracks so all feedback is appreciated!


    Thanks for listening!
     
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  2. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Great vibe mate! Loving the way how it drops!
    Good mixing too.
     
  3. miszt

    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    very nice!! more variation would be good, mix is a touch muddy, but otherwise really nice, likin! wana hear more from ya!
     
  4. ApeCat

    ApeCat Human Dubplate

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    Sounds solid enough, but there's loads of space for some midrange between the bass snarls. Right now it sounds like there's something left out, maybe just an organ or some high tech-sounding synth, whatever bloats your goat...
    The beat change could be a tad more inventive, the main drum beat is repetitive enough as it is, add an extra kick somewhere in the "breakdown" [or would that be slowdown?] to funk shit up a bit.

    My two pence...
     
  5. horace111

    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    Thanks for the feedback guys, I appreciate it!
     
  6. horace111

    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    Someone else ?
     
  7. JamiRant

    JamiRant 4 jump up dnb check my yt

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    liking the vibe mate sounding sick
     
  8. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Wow.....Where'd you pull this from?

    You jumped forward in production skills and technique by shit loads!
     
  9. horace111

    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    Thanks a lot man! Studying maths can make you do some strange stuff :D
     
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    luciduk Active Member

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    o yeah agreed man this is sick!!! keep them coming
     
  11. Jwood27

    Jwood27 VICTIM

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    feeling the vibe mate, keep working at it, like you said yourself a little more variation, and some mids etc could make this very good indeed
     
  12. horace111

    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    Thanks again guys, I'll keep working on it!
     
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    Nice man feelin the vibes on this wun I think the bass could use a little moar variation. and your halfstep comes in a little abrupt maybe would wait another measure. The mix down isnt all there but theres Def a banga in tha mix!
     
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    thedkwbl TheDkwbl

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    Great track. Really like the dark and heavy feel to it - I'd suggest a wailing lead in the background maybe or funky guitar/rhodes stabs etc. But then I think your track is pretty damn good the way it is.
     
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    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    Thanks again for the huge amount of feedback you all gave! ;D