Hurr! got a new track! #2

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ChestOr, Aug 13, 2010.

  1. ChestOr

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    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    a few more hi hats rolling would give it a better feel imo =)
     
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    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    check the soundcloud, there's some (better) feedback there I hope ;)
     
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    not bad, the drums sound a bit weak and could do with filling out a bit, a hi hat roll would be nice as neomind said, its not really my style of dnb but the track isn't too bad really..
     
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    New Version in 1st Post...
     
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    Final Version in First Post..gogogo
     
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    imo its way too slow. 174 bpm would have suited better here i guess.. wouldnt sound so empty. hi hats are fine imo but kick and especially snare need some more work. i really liked the build up, but the drop kinda disappoints tbh. with a better mixdown, a bit faster and a slightly better sounding snare it could be a nice tune tho imo.

    im on headphones today btw too, so could just be me at all.
     
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    tried to fix those things...New Version in first post...