DnB Howitzer - Hondo City Law

[Howitzer]

Hi all, I've got another track together Im quite proud of, thought I'd stick it up here for some critique!

My main concern is my hash of a mixdown, I'm still not totally at one with my monitors.
I'm quite concerned with how the kick sits with the sub, I cut it off a lot lower than my ususal (about 80Hz), sidechained it up to my sub to give it some space in the mix, but I cant hear my sub with my monitors.
So, yeah, fuck knows what its doing! ha!

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fhowitzer%2Fhondo-city-law

 

[Pyrococcus]

Sounding good technically.. I'd try some call-and-response action with the lead melody and some other instrument, as the lead is only soliloquizing.

 

[Howitzer]

cool, thanks for the feedback!
Ive got some brushing up on my theory to do I reckon, I've heard of call and response and can pick it out in a tune, I've yet to utilize it though.