How Dare We / System Crash [Tech Roller/Jump Up]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by junglistguy2221, Dec 24, 2013.

  1. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    any feedback welcome please
     
  2. Reebs

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    No expert, just my 5 cents.

    First one's too short to say much of it. But i like how you assemble your stuff. The same for the second one - but i feel that it needs a little more variation on the themes. I sense it too much homogeneous, and it's easy to lose interest in the long term listening. The lack of ideas for variation seems to lead to that fade-out ending, which sounds like it was used because nothing more could be thought of.

    If you add more interest in it and, with it, more length, it would be awesome.

    Cheers.
     
  3. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    thanks for your feedback. i'll work on adding more variation and changes to the track to keep it interesting and flowing.

    the fade out is mainly because i don't put full tracks up if they might get signed.

    cheers!
     
  4. Northern Seagul

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    1) Huge tune, good beat and heavy bass.
    2) Perfect beat :)

    good works man ;)
     
  5. BattleteK

    BattleteK Active Member

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    I'm especially a fan of the jumpup one! nice1