How Can I Improve On This Perfection

Discussion in 'Production' started by Gonzonian, May 11, 2012.

  1. Gonzonian

    Gonzonian Member

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    I have this masterpiece. I'd say almost perfect. Perhaps some mastering required. Levels slightly out. Mids n stuff.

    I've got a lot of praise for this track. But guys go easy I'm after feedback before it's big release. Donations can be sent to me. Inbox


     
  2. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    are you serious?
     
  3. Gonzonian

    Gonzonian Member

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    Haha yeah I know most people wouldn't expect me to want to improve on this but I really am a perfectionist
     
  4. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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  5. Gonzonian

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    Btw nice track. I feel the drop came on suddenly. I find a pause with an almost 'sucking' effect, if you will, really adds to the contrast between the intro and drop. also have you tried EQ'ing? have you tried looking it up? Some good videos on youtube. If you would like 1 to 1 tutoring I'm always happy :)
     
  6. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    wat is eq'ing never heard of that before ill look into it
     
  7. Gonzonian

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    lol :)
     
  9. neddez

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    hmm, OP it's missing something... i can't figure out what

    edit: try this:

    1) open your sequencer
    2) press ctrl + a
    3) press delete
     
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  10. Gonzonian

    Gonzonian Member

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    What's a sequencer?

    ---------- Post added at 00:00 ---------- Previous post was at 00:00 ----------

    I only have audacity and a microphone
     
  11. `Matt

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    I really hope this is a troll.... If not :-/
     
  12. Elzerk

    Elzerk 00111100 00110011

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    MAN it's perfect, no changes needed.























    You was trying to imitate the sound of horrid diarhhea and nut pieces flapping from between my huge asscheeks hitting on the side of the toilet bowl, right?
     
  13. Skuff

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    What a beautiful composition man.. Whens it due out?
     
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    Lol
     
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    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    You're all being way to nice to this troll...........

    THIS IS FUCKING WANK!........./end discussion....
     
  16. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    its better than any tune ive ever done tho he used eq'ing which im just looking into now
     
  17. d-low

    d-low I know you got soul

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    pecavi wannabe..
     
  18. cptunicorn

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    just turn the bassline up a bit. sounds good mate
     
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    MisterApe 8bit junkie

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    Needs more cowbell.
     
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