HOLOHEDRON - SO MUCH TO SEE

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  1. holohedron

    holohedron Member

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    A minimal, chilled out, but heavy track. Feedback is appreciated.

     
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    duuuuuuude this track is awesome. i feel is needs more though. its heavy but it feel it can be waaaay heavier. like having five 600 pounds fat chicks on you heavy. Go crazy man. at 1:08 I feel the build up is lacking compared to the rest of the track. and at 1;32 or so the weird ambient wobble should be brought up to the surface instead of in the bg :) but great man
     
  3. holohedron

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    thanks man, i was thinking i might go back and add some more. thanks for the feedback, it's encouraging!

    Holo
     
  4. Hostility

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    Hey, nice one! I just wonder, maybe you want a collab? :)
     
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    Def a nice track, I'm liking the more dark vibe. The basses sound alright for me, don't need any more heaviness.
    All tough, I was expecting a moment where the bass filled up everything. Now its bass - drums - bass - drums
    I would let the bass keep on rolling at some point
    That little fill at 3:20 is a bit weird, it's not bad, but I'm not sure if it fits
     
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    Definitely feeling it. Like the reversed vocals, nice drumwork and good production. Only thing I would call out is that there are perhaps 32 bars too many before the second breakdown @ 4:40 or so.

    Love the 2001 sample. Use that one myself :)
     
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    thanks very much for the feedback. i'm thinking of filling the track out a bit more.