Hirca - Pulse

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Freezz, Jul 11, 2013.

  1. Freezz

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    Hey guys!

    After a veeery long time of not posting anything, I have something new! :D



    Let me know what you think! :)

    Cheerz!
     
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    quick bump because i gave feedback no a lot of threads :)
     
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    The intro sounded bright and fresh, though I'm not sure I'm down with that double-kick you did in the very beginning. There was a lot of energy at the drop, though some of the voices seemed to compete with each other beat-wise, and it lost a bit of the nice flow you had in the intro. Maybe just changing up the kick/drums would help, but it feels over-shuffled or otherwise off beat.

    I do like all the incidental pads and effects you've got; they really help pull the track along. The breakdown is nice... I really like the bass, and would like it to carry a bit more melody or rhythm or something—right now it seems almost random. You do have a really solid start, and I think if you sorted out a couple of things it'd shape up nicely.
     
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    First of all thanks :) I see all your points except for the over-shuffle/off beat one... Could you explain that please? :)
     
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    Um.... did you change the track or something? It sounds different than what I remember. Anyway, whatever issue I thought there was in the drums, isn't there now... so either you fixed it, or maybe I shouldn't have done a wake-n-bake this morning before critiquing your work :p As an aside, it's cool how the lead/bright melody follows the kick, it makes it really tight.
     
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    It's still the same link as a few hours ago :) Thx a lot!
     
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    drums sound very clear
     
  8. Freezz

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    Spent a lot of time on 'em ;)