Multi Genre Hip Hop Vs DnB. Crimery - This Rose

[Snowcones]

yoooo

this track blends both hip hop and DnB together
feel free too drop any type of advice, im looking to see how well this goes in the UK particularly as i'll be going there in March.

https://soundcloud.com/crimery%2Fcrimey-this-rose

all samples n shit done by Crimery
thanks in advance,
those who want feedback on tracks alike just let me know.
cheers.

 

[neddez]

the intro is great, that muddy kick sounds out of place but everything else was on point

take all the reverb off the vocals it sounds bollocks, sounds like a cover of Duran Duran or somethin. ive never worked with vocals so i dunno what you could do with them

your drums all sound good and i like the fact you've switched them up. although they need eq/compression
and you need to stick a sub bass under there
the breakdown at 2:44 sounds great