Highway-man >>logic (DANCEFLOOR LIQUID) COMMENTS HUGELY APPRECIATED!!!!

[Highway-man]

dont let the calm intro fool you! This is my first ever tune and im really proud of it for a first bash but i might be thinking its much better than it is coz izts mine so other peoples opinions would be great!

hope you like it!



http://soundcloud.com/highway-man/highway-man-logic


Artist: Highway-man
Title: Logic

 

[technic1210]

like the piano notes nice melody to em,i like the beats,stepy and rolling too!the zap bass sound thing should be longer like more of a drone,the drop with the vocals has no impact and is a bit abrupt!for a 1st attempt it is good, there aresome timing issues with beats and vocal samples!

 

[Highway-man]

cheers man thanks a lot!

 

[Highway-man]

p.s. i think your turntable is missing and arm haha.......

 

[muzzadj]

You already know what i think! Very impressed as a first effort, a million times better than my first efforts!!!

 

[Oria]

for a first attempt is good effort but mixdown does need work to bring some impact to the track as i found it very flat, the piano work sounds right good enough but key elements are too low in the mix so can hardly hear any deep bass or bass drum for example. filtering on vocal snippet has removed too much, and the sample needs a touch up it clicks in places i think? ! keep at it