Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by wingz, Oct 20, 2013.
i had a go aswell.
edit: last post
check it ooot
edited few times now haha
is it that bad?
It sounds very nice and techy. Do continue working on it wingz!
Ooh I'm digging this , good job!
I'll have a proper listen on it on my monitors in a few days when my mac's fixed : ).
I think it needs longer cohesive sequences of some certain instrument..
You have beats and some fart sounds here and there - it would benefit from longer musical elements which bend a bow through e.g. 4 bars.
well basically the whole idea is just sub bass with midrangey stabs, i'm not fully happy with the stabs yet, gotta screw up those midrange stems a bit more
and sobec (may i call you that? haha) probably completely different in a few days, never know
The more minimal the instrumentation ("just sub bass with midrangey stabs") the more comprehensive the sound design usually has to be...
The realms of dub are waiting to be explored...
the realm of my fist is waiting to explore your face
i like it man. very original, mixdowns perfect. no realy criticism. maybe a bit of a longer reverb on the beeps in the intro? sounds sick tho
Yeah, just as you say, the midrange stabs could be better, but over-all it sounds tight.
Needs a good shaker
woeeei thanks guys, i'm at it now.
changed a few things, got a more oldschoolish shaker plus some minor tweaks, sidechained the stabs to the sub so they fit a bit better
Sounding pretty damn fine wingz. At this stage i'd chuck in another drum layer and a few more FX and it'll sound like a tune.
Not quite sure whats happening at 0:54 though... Needs some shit innit
yeah sounding fat man. lov that filtered break pre drop. the only thing id experiment with changing (if it were me) would be the time on the vocal. i ulprobably have it so "move" on the 1st beat and "everybody" is just before. thats just me tho, and maybe you want it that way. either way its sounding fucking sick
yeah, that fll is too highpassed haha
what you mean another drum layer, like more kicks & snares? i think it already sounds quite prominent, only thing that would be a thing to do for me is add in more hats, i'm not that experienced with percussion yet
yeah cartel i get you, the vocals are kinda echoey though. actually i have the "MOVE" right on the drop and the everybody before it, but when it says move everybody gets kind of echoed by the sample itself
Sounds a lot better mate : ) (From what I can hear on my cans.)
Going to put it up for download after the contest is over?
sure thing man, constantly refining it though haha
getting closer i think
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