hello there! that's ur first track? wel if so u got a bright future in producing i believe ..
i love the weirdness and the mass of variations, well done, imo. the intro is awesome !!
sound needs quite a bit of work though, esp. the drums. think they need more punch and clarity. the cymbals in the back the most. try some EQing and transient shaping. difficult to say what u need to do as i don't know the system u are on, but the drums definitely need more room, punch and sharpness. i look forwrad to the next version ...
Ps: writting some reviews of other tracks in this forum will sharply incrase chances getting more for ur track, so get ur fingers dirty mate.