Here's my attempt

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So far the intro is unoriginal but good. Honestly, I can't start yet because I do not want to ruin the original sound I love and don't want to mess with only to make an original shit tune. Drop is cool but I don't think the bass has that play of the drums it should. Again it is good but sounds like you made decent drums for another track and slapped then on the bass. In the break down the bass changes work. Overall it is not bad at all, I am just being overly critical.
 
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Thanks dude. appreciate the critique. didn't make the drums for another track but i can see why you might think that. always giving sound advice. cheers mate.
 
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