DnB Hepnix - Shaolin Feedback

[T3chnicuz]

Hi guys, made this today. Could I have some feedback please? I'm still new to this style, trying to come up with my own style. I think it's closest to jump-up, but not sure since it doesn't sound at all like the modern jump up tunes.

Thanks in advance!

https://soundcloud.com/hepnix%2Fhepnix-shaolin-wip

 

[T3chnicuz]

Another one:

https://soundcloud.com/hepnix%2Fhepnix-ghost-monastery

 

[risto orpus]

I'm not the biggest fan of the jump up style in general but from hearing these tracks i could say your sounds sound very nice but are lacking in structure.
I mean i don't know many jump up artists but macky gee seems to pop off for some people and his songs balance out the metallic sounds with proper melody pretty well.
I hope i've been of any use :d

 

[T3chnicuz]

Thanks! That helps!