help with liquid track

[Lajfis]

Hello guys,
Please your opinion on this liquid track. Whats bad? How better do it? What think about beat ? Kick, snare, hats, bassline, melody ? I think, that still it can be better. What think?
Thanks for your advice and tips.

https://soundcloud.com/laaaajfiss%2Flajfis-you-know

 

[Zethus909]

i think the snare is overpowering the kick drum.....if youre going to have that fat of a snare...it needs an even fatter kick...the snare and the kick need to dance together....and right now...the snare is dancing all over the kicks feet...the kick is saying "OUCH OUCH OUCH"...let me dance